Friday, May 24, 2013

Book Tour: Review Of The Grave Winner By Lindsey R. Loucks




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The Grave Winner
(The Grave Winner #1)

Leigh Baxton is terrified her mom will come back from the dead - just like the prom queen did.

While the town goes beehive over the news, Leigh bikes to the local cemetery and buries some of her mom's things in her grave to keep her there. When the hot and mysterious caretaker warns her not to give gifts to the dead, Leigh cranks up her punk music and keeps digging.

She should have listened.

Two dead sorceresses evicted the prom queen from her grave to bury someone who offered certain gifts. Bury them alive, that is, then resurrect them to create a trio of undead powerful enough to free the darkest sorceress ever from her prison inside the earth.

With help from the caretaker and the dead prom queen, Leigh must find out what's so special about the gifts she gave, and why the sorceresses are stalking her and her little sister. If she doesn't, she'll either lose another loved one or have to give the ultimate gift to the dead - herself.

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Excerpt:

Dad, Darby, and I stood rooted in place at Mom's burial. The weight in my chest threatened to suffocate me if I looked at the lid of her gleaming casket any longer. Instead, I focused on the black birds cutting across the sky in a sharp V formation. They pressed on until the tops of the trees took them from me.

The preacher had stopped talking a long time ago. People still crowded around us, heads bent, smothering their sniffles with tissues. Someone patted my back. I wished they'd stop. No attempt to comfort would help.

The white-haired old man hovering back by the fence hacked loudly then puffed on a cigarette with a dirt-spattered hand. When we arrived at Heartland Cemetery, I'd seen him preparing another grave for a casket. He bounced on the balls of his feet, probably anxious to get the body in the ground.

Mom's body. Once the ground swallowed her, her death would be final, and that guy wanted to speed things up. He probably wanted to get to his coffee break or something. Heat flashed through my gut. I took a step towards him.

Dad grabbed the collar of my dress and yanked me back. I opened my mouth to say something, but the words died in my throat when I saw the tears slipping down his cheeks.

Darby had her head buried in his side. She looped her small fingers around my plaid belt, the one Mom got me for my fifteenth birthday. I grasped Darby's warm hand and closed my eyes against the pricks of hurt inside them.

The people closing us in shifted and began to wander away. The old man inched closer to Mom's casket. Dad tightened his hold on my collar. I gripped Darby's fingers and glared at the man.

The few people who were left gave us consoling looks and said empty words before they drifted off. One was the woman who'd seen my funeral attire earlier and clucked her tongue in disapproval. Mom had loved my black eyeliner and these combat boots, though. She'd said I reminded her of herself when she was young.

"It's time," Dad said.

A choked cry forced its way out of my mouth. No, it wasn't. If we left, the old man would lower Mom into the ground. It would be final, and I couldn't stand it.

"Why?" I asked, my voice cracking.

Dad just shook his head, hugged us both to him, and turned to leave Mom with the old man.

I wriggled free and ran.

"Leigh?" Dad called.

I didn't know where I was going or what I was doing. But I needed to be away-away from that stupid man who wanted to put the final punctuation mark on Mom's life. Away from the unfairness of her death.

My breath came in quick, sharp gasps as I wound around crumbling headstones. The sun threw bright rays on the maze of white, rocky paths and made my eyes tear up. I pumped my legs harder until I became nothing but movement. The untied laces of my left boot whipped my bare legs. Grass and mud around the graves muffled my steps until my boot flew off my foot and landed with a thwack in the middle of a cluster of trees.

I leaned over to catch my breath, unsure if I wanted to laugh or cry. Several yards behind me, Dad and Darby stood and waited. I waved them on to the gates and went to retrieve my boot. There seemed to be no one around except the trees and me. The leaves murmured to each other while the wind swayed the branches. Heartland Cemetery had more trees than the rest of Krapper, Kansas, and they all whispered and danced for the amusement of the dead.

A sudden breeze brushed over my arms and sent a faint smell of rotten hamburger past my nose. My stomach rolled. What was that? That didn't smell like the usual slaughtered cow stink that came from the other side of town. I shoved my foot into my boot and hobbled away.

The breeze and stink faded to nothing as quickly as they had come. I bent to tie my boot, but a crackling behind me made me pause. A cloud cast long, dark shadows over the headstones and chilled my skin. The hairs along my arms prickled.

The crackling came closer. I turned my head slightly. In the corner of my eye, inky black darkness crawled up the bark of a nearby tree.

I gasped and shot to my feet. The black ink crept to the tips of the branches and ripped away its leaves, leaving it empty and naked. More darkness pooled at the bottom of the trunk and inched along the grass towards me. Every green blade curled in on itself with that awful crackling sound, dying. The darkness reached straight for me.

A shudder raced across my shoulders. I stumbled backwards. My gaze caught on blackened footprints that led to the tree. Someone was doing this? But how? This wasn't possible.

I glanced back at Dad and Darby, but they'd gone on without me. This couldn't be real. None of it. I shook my head hard, trying to wake myself. Nothing changed.

Something dark fluttered from behind the dead tree. Whoever was doing this stood behind the trunk.

I dug my nails into my palms, pressed my lips together, and took a step back. A branch snapped under my boot, louder than the crackling. I froze. My heart jumped.

Scraps of muddy fabric flapped around the trunk, followed by a girl.

My flesh crept up and down my bones. Sweat trickled down the back of my dress. That rotten meat stink kicked my stomach, forcing me to clap a hand over my nose and mouth.

The torn fabric that hung from the girl's scrawny frame looked like a prom dress. Mud and grime covered her entire body. Her mouth sagged open in a silent scream.

I couldn't move. The darkness pooled underneath the dangling hem of the girl's dress and spread dangerously close to the toes of my boots, but I couldn't move.

The girl raised her tucked chin and looked at me. The whites of her eyes blazed behind the mud caking her face. Her open mouth held the same black gloom that dripped at her feet. A grimy tiara perched on the side of her head.

My muscles stiffened. I gasped as recognition hit me.

I knew the girl. Or knew of her. Her social circle was my social nightmare. Her name was Sarah, a popular cheerleader who committed suicide a week ago.

But how could she be here when she should be in the ground? I had to be hallucinating. My grief, the stress from the day, it was all making me see things.

Jumbled whispers swirled through the air. Was Sarah trying to tell me something? Because I didn't want to hear it. My feet finally got the message to move just before the killing darkness touched my boots. I ran.

"Mom," I called without thinking. Mom.

The old man cranked a lever that lowered her into the ground. A dull pain stitched my side. A sob welled in my throat. I couldn't watch.

"Dad!" I raced for the cemetery gates. He and Darby stood just outside. When I neared them, I breathed, "Something's wrong." Because what else could I say in front of Darby? If she'd seen what I saw, it would be too much to handle in one day. I stood so I blocked her view of anything behind me and resisted the urge to flip the glasses off her face.

Jo, my best friend, put her hand on my shoulder. I hadn't even noticed she was there. "What is it, Leigh?"

I took giant gulps of air and risked a glance behind me. The trees looked normal. Black death hadn't dripped everywhere. Everyone was in their graves.

That fact made me wince. "Nothing."




My Review:

The following review is my opinion and not a paid review. I was received a free copy of the book from the author for my honest opinion.

Leigh, her little sister Darby and her Dad Ken are all three in her bedroom listening to Darby who is nine years old read from a book that Darby and their mom was reading together before she died. They buried their mother today and while at the cemetery Leigh saw Sarah a cheerleader from her school that killed herself last week. And now Leigh is sitting in her room with her Dad and little sister who are both asleep. Leigh hears a taptaptap on her bedroom window and she knows it is not the storm.

Leigh is at her mother's grave burying some of her things and putting bricks on her grave like they use to in the old days. Putting bricks on a grave was some kind of ritual that was supposed to keep the dead from rising. Leigh is afraid her mother is going to come back like the cheerleader Sarah did. Everyone is calling it the Lazarus Syndrome, like Lazarus in the bible who came back to life. She doesn't want her mother coming back like that. Yes she would like more anything to have her mother back again but her coming back like that would be wrong and scary.

Leigh is beginning to fall in love with Callum her best friend's brother. Callum and Leigh don't think that Sarah coming back from the dead is Lazarus syndrome. They don't know what woke her up but they don't believe it is that.

Leigh met another boy at the cemetery and now she is starting to have feelings for him. When she first met him she called him scary boy but she found out later his name is Tram. Leigh can't figure out who he is. He explained to her who he was but he is still a mystery. He is seventeen years old and lost his parents when he was small and can't really remember them.

Leigh is still trying to keep her mother from coming back from the dead. She has returned to the graveyard and the same boy is there that was there the last time. He is telling her not leave things for the dead. He doesn't know that Leigh is trying to keep her mother from coming back. But why should you not leave gifts for the dead?

Leigh hit Callum because he brought another girl to his room a cheerleader, Megan. Jo told her that he broke up with. Callum tried to explain it all to Leigh but she was not having any of it. I mean a guy she was attracted too and who she thought was attracted to her is still supposedly dating his ex-girlfriend. He tries to explain it to her but Leigh is hurt and mad so yeah she hit him and busted his lip. Callum has to walk around school for a couple of days with red and swollen lip.

Leigh is just a child herself a fifteen year who is experiencing something no child should. She is empty inside without her mother. At the same time she is trying to take care of her little sister Darby. She is trying to make Darby's hurt and life better. She has now been put in the position of trying to be a mother for her little sister. She is hurting but she puts her pain way, tucks it way down deep inside of herself so she can put on a smile for her sister.

Darby is having a harder time I think than anyone over losing her mother. I know Leigh is too I mean, is everything that she is seeing and going through real or is she hallucinating? But Leigh is a great big sister never turning Darby away always comforting her when she needs it. I think Leigh is trying to take on Darby's and her Dad's pain too. Leigh loves her family very, very much. The things she would go through or do to save them now that is love. She has a heart bigger than the whole world. Poor girl no wonder she may be imaging everything that does not seem real. But at the same time I really don't think she is imagining it.

Leigh has gotten herself in trouble and who knows how she is going to get out of it alive. All she was thinking about was saving Darby. She knew what would happen if she promised herself instead of her sister. She traded her life for her sisters. They all miss her mom and now she is wondering what she has got herself into. What will her father and sister do without her and her mom?

Tram is still not telling her everything. What is Leigh going to do to get herself out of the mess she has gotten into? What about Callum? Does she love him or does she love Tram? Which one does she care about the most? Which one of them will win her heart in the end? I am still asking myself the same question is Tram real? Is Leigh losing her mind?

The Grave Winner is one great big mystery that will keep you up at night. You just have to keep flipping those pages because you just have to know what Leigh is going to get herself into next. If you like reading books where the dead come to life The Grave Winner is definitely the book for you.




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Lindsey R. Loucks

Lindsey R. Loucks works as a school librarian in rural Kansas. When she's not discussing books with anyone who will listen, she's dreaming up her own stories. Eventually her brain gives out, and she'll play hide and seek with her cat, put herself in a chocolate induced coma, or watch scary movies alone in the dark to reenergize. She's been with her significant other for almost two decades.

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Lindsey R. Loucks said...

Thank you for hosting me and for the great review!

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