Alizel's
Song
by
Bill Pottle
About
The Author:
Bill is a martial artist, author, and university
professor in Colorado. He tries not to take himself too seriously
while his work explores the interplay between religion and science,
fantasy and technology, and what it means to be a human. Bill earned
his Master's Degree in Biological Engineering from Cornell University
and lives happily ever after with his wife and daughter.
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Genre:
Christian Fantasy
Publisher: Ellechor Publishing House
Release
Date: March 3, 2013Amazon
Book
Description:
An unranked angel, Alizel, tells the inside story
of the rebellion of Lucifer and the fall of man. Join him as he
strolls through Heaven's gardens, ponders theological questions
with other angels, and battles against others who have turned
away.
This epic tale will take you from the inner workings of
the quark to the interplay between galaxies, from what lies hidden in
the soul to the fundamental questions of good and evil.
Praise
for Alizel's Song!
"When
Pottle told the story of Lucifer and man's fall he cleverly
incorporated modern scientific theory into the biblical
creation story." ~ Carol Peterson, Amazon Reviewer
"Highly
recommended for Fantasy Fiction lovers! "~Rachel Shelley,
Amazon Reviewer
"This
book captured my attention from page 1, Cannot wait for
the sequel. "~Linda, Amazon Reviewer
Excerpt:
Raphael, however, was braver than most. Alizel crouched behind the
tree as he saw him approaching Luciferel slowly from behind, his soft
footfalls beating a calm rhythm. Rafael had broad, even shoulders and
was never in a hurry. Raphael, Alizel imagined, was a healer,
although he may not have been aware of it at the time, since angels
were never "injured" or in need of being healed. They were either
perfectly healthy or in the Containment. Neither situation could be
made better by anyone else's help. The concepts of destruction and
healing were only just beginning to dawn on them. Still, Raphael's
gentleness always made Alizel and the other Unranked feel safe in his
presence, and he seemed to have a gift for fixing whatever troubled
angels' hearts. Alizel watched anxiously.
Luciferel was still hunched over the rail that guarded the Portal,
and didn't notice the other angel's approach. Rafael stood there
for a moment as if contemplating what to say, and then placed a firm
hand on Luciferel's shoulder.
Luciferel whipped his head around, fear shining in his eyes. His
body relaxed slightly in Rafael's presence but his expression was
still guarded. Rafael's countenance was serene but troubled. He was
one of the few who could take in the full pain of another and still
exude a soothing aura to those around him. Alizel wondered how much
pain he had already absorbed from the rest of the angels…and how
much more he would have to before this was all over.
Rafael just looked at his fellow Seraph, as if trying to probe the
depths of Luciferel's soul. He didn't speak for several minutes,
until Luciferel finally met his gaze. Rafael didn't flinch, but the
lines around his eyes drew downwards.
"What has happened to you?" Rafael seemed to already know, but
asked his question more to see if Luciferel himself understood.
"I am becoming stronger," he said, gasping for breath. If it
weren't for the seriousness of the situation, Alizel would have
almost thought it to be a joke.
Rafael swept his soft brown eyes over Luciferel's body and then
raised his eyebrows. "You have rejected God's power that sustains
us. Your body is falling apart. If you do not let Him flow through
you again, you will surely perish."
"I will not die. I have found another power to sustain me."
The shock of his words made Rafael look on in confusion. Alizel's
eyes narrowed as he listened. Was Luciferel bluffing? He certainly
didn't seem to be sustained.
"All this time," Luciferel continued, each word labored, "we
thought that was the only way that we could live. Yet only after
blocking that vile substance did I find my own true power."
"This power you speak of has left your body broken and damaged.
This internal power cannot compete with God," Raphael countered.
"It is still dormant, unused." Luciferel waited to catch his
breath before speaking more. "I am the first one to find this fiery
power within me. I surely meant to perish. Why would I want to
continue in a world where I must bow down to a Son of Mud? But my
anger, my displeasure, my feelings against the current situation
sustained my body. As these feelings grow stronger, so does my body.
I just do not know how to channel this power yet."
"You never doubted the Lord before. You must come back and let
your body receive the Father again. You can still be bright!"
Alizel could tell Rafael's mind was working furiously, probing to
find a crack in the wall of resentment Luciferel had erected around
himself.
"I was a fool then, surely. I did not understand that God only
meant to betray us." The more Luciferel talked, the stronger he
seemed to become.
"There are uncertain times ahead, to be sure. But that is all the
more reason we need you with us, as our leader." Rafael was
appealing to Luciferel's sense of vanity now. "No one was able to
lead as well as you or to command as much respect as you. What will
we do without you?"
"Honestly?" Luciferel looked at him, but from Rafael's
expression it was obvious he didn't see the same Luciferel looking
back at him. "Honestly, I don't care."
Luciferel got up to leave. His gait was still hobbling, but he could
walk away on his own. His words trailed after him. "Come find me if
you come to your senses. Come find me if you want to be stronger."
My Review:
I was given a free copy of the book for my honest opinion.
Alizel's Song is the telling of one man's version of the how the universe was created and interpretation of the bible. How the war in Heaven was started and who started it and why. It tells of all the Angles of who they were and what their jobs and place were. There were only a few of the Angels who knew what their jobs were and what their purpose was. The highest ranking angels were the Seraphim known as the "flaming ones". They were a secretive and powerful group of angels whom no one ever saw much of. They kept to themselves never socializing with the other angels. There was no way to mistake them for any other angel because they wore platinum sashes with a crimson "S". The Seraphim was led by Luciferel. They never held an election that would make him the leader. It just seemed like the right thing to do. It just felt like that was his job and all the angels followed his command without question.
The Cherubim were next in line to the Seraphim. It was said that they had the most knowledge and that they completely knew the mind of God. If any of the angels ever wanted to know anything the Cherubim were the ones to go to that is if they would see you. I kind of got the feeling that the Cherubim thought they were above all the other angels because they had more knowledge than anyone else. They didn't have time for the other angels. They were supposedly so smart that they probably couldn't understand the other angels and just thought they were speaking gibberish most of the time or it may have just seemed that way to them. They were easy to recognize by their white sashes with a golden "C" on it and it was said that these angels had four faces and wings.
Next in line were the Thrones there were only twelve of them. It had been said that the Thrones were far above the other angels and had a special task but no one knew what this task was and it was not because of not asking. The Thrones wore earthly brown sashes with a green "T" and they served as instructors to the other angels.
Next in line were the Virtues they were always running around trying to figure out what their job was. They wore golden sashes with a white "V".
Next in line were the Powers. They were the gatekeepers and Azazel was their chief. They wore golden armor and red sashes.
Next in line were the Principalities their job was to watch over a hundred angels. They wore white sashes with a blue "P".
Next are the Archangels who watched over ten angels along with the Unranked. They wore white sashes with a green letter "A".
Next in line were the Unranked whom most didn't know what their job was or what their purpose was. If any of the higher ranking angels knew they weren't telling.
Angels didn't have to worry about anything like food, water or shelter. All of their needs were taken care of by the radiant energy of the Father. They never had to worry about sleeping, eating or diseases because they shared everything. Angels had no concept of time. If they sat down to look at a flower to watch it grow or just to admire its beauty they could have been there for a couple of minutes or a thousand years they didn't know. They had been doing the same things for fifteen billion earth years.
Angels were not allowed to leave Heaven. They had to stay in their realm. Making sure that this happened was part of the Powers job watching the boarders of Heaven making sure no one got in or out. One day the angels got worried that with God building the universe that there would be others from the planets that he was creating would try to get into Heaven or maybe even someone from the inside would attack them. Or what if an angel got by them and went to earth to stop God's plan. Angels were always trying to get by them to go make their own mark in the world. Then the angels got this idea to ask God to make them a weapon so they could learn to use it and defend their selves.
Is this why the war started? Verin thinks God doesn't know what he is doing that is the reason it is taking him so long to create the world or the earth. Verin thinks someone else needs to step in and take over. That maybe someone else knows what to do. God created the entire world but he doesn't know what to do with it now that he has created it. The angels couldn't create the world because they didn't exist. Who created or made God? How did he come into existence? God created the angels, humans and what about the other planets or the rest of the universe? He created angels for Heaven and humans for earth right? So what about the rest of the universe? Are there other life form created in God's image? God, Angels and humans all supposedly have a head, two arms and two legs although they look different and angels have wings and humans do not. So what lives in the rest of the universe? Did God just create other planets because he was bored without any purpose to it at all? Why put life created in his image on one planet and not put life created in his image on the other planets. Why create them if not for the same purpose?
3 comments:
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I believe in Angeles. I have lost many people in my life. My parents husband a child. I feel them all the time. I'm a very positive person. When I do have a negative thought I can almost feel them push it away. I miss them all and would prefer them to be here but Angels
i have many
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